御園はくい on Nostr: r composition-wise the figure fills up more of the frame, whereas for your previous ...
r (nprofile…j8hf) composition-wise the figure fills up more of the frame, whereas for your previous ones you keep having the urge to draw the entire figure with the legs and all (which makes them smaller and have lesser hierarchy compared to the background)
there's the obvious light-dark contrast between the figure and the bg too
lastly the moon draws attention to the head, sort of like a halo
the eyes are slightly derp but only really noticeable at full zoom, you'll improve over time
>The anatomy doesn't look bad because it only shows half the body and even that is mostly covered with the clothes.
yes that's why it works much better. keep working on it but if it's not that good yet it's okay to hide it behind clothes (eg. a lot of other artists tend to hide hands because they can't draw hands
there's the obvious light-dark contrast between the figure and the bg too
lastly the moon draws attention to the head, sort of like a halo
the eyes are slightly derp but only really noticeable at full zoom, you'll improve over time
>The anatomy doesn't look bad because it only shows half the body and even that is mostly covered with the clothes.
yes that's why it works much better. keep working on it but if it's not that good yet it's okay to hide it behind clothes (eg. a lot of other artists tend to hide hands because they can't draw hands