Alphastream :verified: on Nostr: npub1u4kdj…nvxe4 npub1ztkkp…glanu And maybe I should start with: - Ask the editor ...
npub1u4kdjphm3zjuanddjnuf0x2dw4gxleg4n6j3c8equp4w6z8mmxyq0nvxe4 (npub1u4k…vxe4) npub1ztkkp35jykmfywgxm27g46gxvzycygpvqqr6q3jn0nrnh2x0sq2qtglanu (npub1ztk…lanu) And maybe I should start with:
- Ask the editor which parts were confusing and suggest a few potential fixes.
These kinds of confusions come from our writer brain having a deep advanced understanding of the subject, and what we write isn’t clear to the person new to it. How can we better serve the new first-time reader? If we can identify what that new reader isn’t going to grasp, we can rewrite for that. Often we are combining thoughts too early on.
- Ask the editor which parts were confusing and suggest a few potential fixes.
These kinds of confusions come from our writer brain having a deep advanced understanding of the subject, and what we write isn’t clear to the person new to it. How can we better serve the new first-time reader? If we can identify what that new reader isn’t going to grasp, we can rewrite for that. Often we are combining thoughts too early on.