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Both of my beta readers on this one have taken exception to the color of our protagonist's eyes being described as the color of gunmetal. This is apparently the first time they've ever seen gunmetal used as a color and they insist nobody else is going to know what it is either. What color comes to mind when you see the word? Do you envision a sparkling deep gray color or something else entirely?
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