Jaden on Nostr: So the time travel novel I'm attempting to write. 😒 got like 1/2 1st chapter! Main ...
So the time travel novel I'm attempting to write. 😒 got like 1/2 1st chapter!
Main character Corey . 18 years old. Sees a figure like stalking him. It's his older self warning him of mistakes he gonna make in his life.
Opening. Corey is looking out his bedroom window and sees a 60 year old guy looking up at him. He looks kinda familiar 🤔
Honest feedback. Would this Opening chapter hook you in? 🤔 or has this shit been done before?
#TimeTravelAuthors
Main character Corey . 18 years old. Sees a figure like stalking him. It's his older self warning him of mistakes he gonna make in his life.
Opening. Corey is looking out his bedroom window and sees a 60 year old guy looking up at him. He looks kinda familiar 🤔
Honest feedback. Would this Opening chapter hook you in? 🤔 or has this shit been done before?
#TimeTravelAuthors