David W. Jones on Nostr: nprofile1q…v8lmf Your poem brings a rich presence of winter life from outside into ...
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Your poem brings a rich presence of winter life from outside into my head, too. Thanks for that!
One thought: Maybe change "Geese are calling from the lake" to "Geese call from the lake"? A little more parallel to the next line where gulls squabble.
Your poem brings a rich presence of winter life from outside into my head, too. Thanks for that!
One thought: Maybe change "Geese are calling from the lake" to "Geese call from the lake"? A little more parallel to the next line where gulls squabble.