Your moms new boyfriend on Nostr: Tracks all but done (need to retrack arabic solo since the ending goes a bit out of ...

Tracks all but done (need to retrack arabic solo since the ending goes a bit out of time)

What yall think?
Is it too busy? Do i need vocals on it? Is it retarded? Lmk, I genuinely am still learning production and composition, so it does help

Please reboost so I can improve
https://whinge.town/media/9f8f0fa8-6feb-4678-8dc0-ad67d4d38882/AsylumPreCleanup.mp3