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2024-06-18 14:29:05

Nilly Robot on Nostr: #WritersCoffeeClub 18. Do you consciously apply show rather than tell in your writing ...

#WritersCoffeeClub 18. Do you consciously apply show rather than tell in your writing or do the cards land where they may?

Oh, I'm an unbeliveably bad tell-er and it's made worse by the usual perspective (close 3rd that violently wants to be 1st person). First draft 'show' ends up like a bullet point list of facial reactions, lol.

I'm making an effort though, and I try to rework it when I come back through.
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