Kyle Rankin on Nostr: Here are two examples from the text along with active voice rewrites that demonstrate ...

Here are two examples from the text along with active voice rewrites that demonstrate why active voice makes for more direct and readable docs:

P: "DETECT (DE) — Possible cybersecurity attacks and compromises are found and analyzed."

A: "DETECT (DE) — Find and analyze possible cybersecurity attacks and compromises."

P: "RESPOND (RS) — Actions regarding a detected cybersecurity incident are taken."

A: "RESPOND (RS) — Take actions regarding a detected cybersecurity incident."

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