Kurt Hohmann on Nostr: #WritersCoffeeClub 3 "Are dialogue tags flexible?" laughed John. I have been accused ...
#WritersCoffeeClub 3
"Are dialogue tags flexible?" laughed John.
I have been accused of not using *enough* dialog tags. Consider the following snippet:
"Damn." Matt stared up at the rafters overhead. "Isn't this the same place they shot Evil Dead?"
"That one was a lot bigger." Al snorted. "And better decorated." He turned to the entrance. "What say we grab our stuff?"
"Okay, but first, where's the loo?" Rachel shifted back and forth from one foot to the other. "I really do need to go."
"Are dialogue tags flexible?" laughed John.
I have been accused of not using *enough* dialog tags. Consider the following snippet:
"Damn." Matt stared up at the rafters overhead. "Isn't this the same place they shot Evil Dead?"
"That one was a lot bigger." Al snorted. "And better decorated." He turned to the entrance. "What say we grab our stuff?"
"Okay, but first, where's the loo?" Rachel shifted back and forth from one foot to the other. "I really do need to go."