Kurt Hohmann on Nostr: #WritersCoffeeClub 29 What did you edit out of your most recent book? There was ...
#WritersCoffeeClub 29
What did you edit out of your most recent book?
There was originally a scene in which my MC calls the police to assist an apparently homeless and mentally-challenged man; they arrive and transport him to a hospital. In the new version, she considers whether or not calling the police is likely to have a positive outcome, and decides instead to enlist the aid of a friend and help the man herself.
Change of attitude based on real-life observations.
What did you edit out of your most recent book?
There was originally a scene in which my MC calls the police to assist an apparently homeless and mentally-challenged man; they arrive and transport him to a hospital. In the new version, she considers whether or not calling the police is likely to have a positive outcome, and decides instead to enlist the aid of a friend and help the man herself.
Change of attitude based on real-life observations.