VikingWays on Nostr: It makes sense that you obviously know the ending so you have to get there, but his ...
It makes sense that you obviously know the ending so you have to get there, but his writing really struggled to make it as epic as it could have been. So many places where the dialogue felt forces or out of place and the story didn't flow well.
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