James Edwards on Nostr: npub10n9kw…dtjug Yeah I do this lot, and I'm really vague about the passing of time ...

npub10n9kwhemskr7uzjrp7ltr4nj9j6fdl5vkv0u8vc56u9tsfwh84hsrdtjug (npub10n9…tjug) Yeah I do this lot, and I'm really vague about the passing of time ("a few weeks later", "at some point last year" etc.) so the timeline isn't solidified, allowing for unwritten questions about chains of cause and effect. And the MC's age is never explicitly said, you have to work it out.

I've also been messing with tense shifting within sentences, eg. the sentence begins a few seconds ago, but then time catches up halfway through and the sentence switches to present tense :-)