Thomas Renkert🦞 on Nostr: npub133pv4…hhgxy npub1kt3hu…75004 You could've done so much with it, with this ...

npub133pv4h5l3377cpaqwdlzqqmy6ar2v6t79u8t999yhryjq0xj8g3qxhhgxy (npub133p…hgxy) npub1kt3hutklgrma64ykjwk4trxq9rtyfnxhkjz729g4pd9xl7hzhrjse75004 (npub1kt3…5004) You could've done so much with it, with this protagonist and the environment. But "oh yeah, there are some super secret occult rituals involved" (which are also so simple and mundane an average police woman can perform them, and which boil down to childlike wonder) is the cheapest cop-out I've ever read. I think I have 5 better endings just off the top of my head ...