Simon Ashcroft on Nostr: Last night's poems, Michelle - at least, from my standpoint and time zone. I'm used ...
Last night's poems, Michelle (npub1dsd…l2mp) - at least, from my standpoint and time zone.
I'm used to you writing two poems that, read together, become one. Now, you have done four...!
In the first, a hand, in mysterious twilight, stems the metaphorical bleeding of your wounded, emotional heart. Next, you proceed into night, sleep becoming a metaphor for death before dawn's rebirth. You wonder if the experiences left behind, or to come, have meaning, seeing them as fragments of nothingness. Thirdly, the wonder worker - I assume the one who stemmed the flow of lifeblood at the beginning - brings healing, that one's love giving you the life of starfire. It seems, then, there is meaning to your existence. Your conclusion? You return to twilight. That same thaumaturge hides you in the darkness, but, in offerring worship, perhaps exalts you in seeing a light in you of which you are hardly aware. The light, maybe, that one has given you in the third poem.
You are exquisitely romantic in the thread that runs through these four.
I'm used to you writing two poems that, read together, become one. Now, you have done four...!
In the first, a hand, in mysterious twilight, stems the metaphorical bleeding of your wounded, emotional heart. Next, you proceed into night, sleep becoming a metaphor for death before dawn's rebirth. You wonder if the experiences left behind, or to come, have meaning, seeing them as fragments of nothingness. Thirdly, the wonder worker - I assume the one who stemmed the flow of lifeblood at the beginning - brings healing, that one's love giving you the life of starfire. It seems, then, there is meaning to your existence. Your conclusion? You return to twilight. That same thaumaturge hides you in the darkness, but, in offerring worship, perhaps exalts you in seeing a light in you of which you are hardly aware. The light, maybe, that one has given you in the third poem.
You are exquisitely romantic in the thread that runs through these four.