Dave Dawkins (D. Harrigon) on Nostr: This chapter has been kicking my butt for about a month, now. Then yesterday I ...
This chapter has been kicking my butt for about a month, now. Then yesterday I realised the MC needed someone to talk to, otherwise it's just a big exposition dump. The problem being, they are by themselves, but then, yes! There is another character I can put in there with them!
Which now involves a massive rewrite of the last three chapters.
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